I have taken the challenge... the Fall Writing Frenzy challenge! Hop over and take a look at all the photos. See if one inspires a story, poem, or any other musings. Then enter the contest. Hurry! It's only open for three days. A huge THANK YOU to all the donors for prizes and, of course, to the hosts, Kaitlyn Sanchez and Lydia Lukidis and to the whole kid lit community!
I selected this sweet picture and was inspired to write a little poem.
THE PUMPKIN PATCH
(Image 5)
(Image 5)
Pirates wear a black patch.
And fairies wear a leaf patch,
a splotchy reddish tree patch.
Come and twirl with me.
Flutter through the sun patch.
Then sputter through the light patch,
a shiny yellow bright patch.
Come and swirl with me.
Slide along the frost patch.
Or bounce along the rough patch,
a hidden bumpy tough patch.
Come and whirl with me.
Pick one from the orange patch.
And stuff the scarecrow’s knee patch.
Then zag into the maze patch.
Come and furl with me.
I love the energy of this poem and the beautiful visuals!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Heather. I found yours and loved it! I laughed out loud. I couldn't see a way to comment. Hope you see this. :)
DeleteGreat job using the word patch in so many ways. Very creative
ReplyDeleteThank you! I've now come up with more. I may need to continue my play with this.
DeleteTracy: Fun and full of fall's special gifts! I love this!
ReplyDelete(Such a different response from what I wrote using the same photo as inspiration.)
Thank you! I can't find yours. I'll keep looking!
DeleteSuch an imaginative story with enticing and creative wordplay. Loved the "hug" of the "furl" at the end.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I'm so glad you got the "hug" at the end. I'm still trying to find yours also!
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ReplyDeleteBecause I posted a reply in the wrong place. =)
DeleteTracy - I love this! So visual.
ReplyDeleteIsn't it interesting how one image can take people in different directions?
Thank you! It has been fascinating to see all the directions one image can go!
DeleteThanks for sharing this fun and passionate rhyme with us for the fall writing frenzy! Sincerely, Kaitlyn Sanchez
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